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Febuary 2001 Yabb Message Board Archive
Subject: Small Hour Blues
by distantsun   |   05/13/01 at 10:49:04

Hi folkes, Its Ash. I havent visited the new site before, NICE ONE!!! Its good to see old names still posting! Anyway this is a new track. Any help would be appreciated.

Genre Rock/Pop

'Small Hour Blues'

V1
Dust me off
I've been lying in cheating grass
Tell me off
I don't deserve your pity

V2
Tell me everything that you hate about me
I'll tell you everything I can change
Tell me everything that you love about me
As we slip into the danger

Ch
Oh, The Small hour blues
Sail the mirrored lake
After just one line
I can see you fake it
Oh, The small hour blues
I could do nothing

V3
Watered Ships
Passing in the night
Off our course
I never saw what you had

V4
Talk down to me like I was on your should and
I'll look up to you
Tell me what its like to be around me
As we slip into the danger

Ch
Oh, The Small hour blues
Sail the mirrored lake
After just one line
I can see you fake it
Oh, The small hour blues
I could do nothing

Copyright 2001
Ash Wassell



Subject: Re: Small Hour Blues
by pafaustine   |   05/15/01 at 05:04:22

Hi Ash,

This has a good overall feel to it, but I admit I was distracted by the inconsistent rhyming. I was also thrown by some of the images that didn't quite connect for me. "Cheating grass," for example, doesn't bring anything to mind. And while "small hour blues" works just fine, I don't see any connection to sailing (and I don't know what a "watered ship" is).

It's OK that these phrases don't give rise to concrete concepts for me, but they should at least stir some vague feeling.

What am I missing?  :-/

Subject: Re: Small Hour Blues
by distantsun   |   05/15/01 at 05:25:19

The Idea was that the arguament was like a never ending voyage, as if the relationship was never plain sailing.
The rhyming just happened, and I did want to form a surreal edge to the track.
Maybe I tried too hard to capture images