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Subject: JT, Old Dan, Dan, Mr. Fortunato et al - Join in!
Posted by: jamesbmitchell
Where are you all?  Jump on in, please!  I need you!  Save me from myself here -- we need more feedback. 

Is it because it's summer, or what?  Or if I'm overposting, let me know.  I can shut up -- Really!  I'm not used to being the noisy one in this group.

It's just so quiet around here anymore (creepy music slowly swells in the background...) and I think I just heard...  something ... coming up the stairs ....  wait.... You???  No... No! Stay away!  I promise to...
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Subject: Re:JT, Old Dan, Dan, Mr. Fortunato et al - Join in!
Posted by: Steve_S.
Hey James...

Just so you don't feel bad, traffic is a little lower on all of the boards. I think you're right. It's summertime and people aren't surfing the net much. I periodically read stuff here but lyrics aren't my thing. I don't feel I can give good feedback on them.....

Anyway, keep talking!!   

Subject: Re:JT, Old Dan, Dan, Mr. Fortunato et al - Join in!
Posted by: old_dan

Quote from: jamesbmitchell on July 18, 2002, 08:32 AM   

Where are you all?  Jump on in, please!  I need you!  Save me from myself here -- we need more feedback. 

Is it because it's summer, or what?  Or if I'm overposting, let me know.  I can shut up -- Really!  I'm not used to being the noisy one in this group.

It's just so quiet around here anymore (creepy music slowly swells in the background...) and I think I just heard...  something ... coming up the stairs ....  wait.... You???  No... No! Stay away!  I promise to...
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Ok, here's my critique.
First of all

Where are you all?  Jump on in, please!  I need you!  Save me from myself here -- we need more feedback.

is kinda cliche but it works in this instance. I like it that it doesn't rhyme.....

Seriously, I've been busier than a three legged cat trying to bury a turd on a frozen lake. I have several lyrics I want to post but feel I should critique a couple of others first
Hopefully this weekend..............

btw, nice use of the board tags.

Subject: Re:JT, Old Dan, Dan, Mr. Fortunato et al - Join in!
Posted by: DanGray
HAALLLOOOO!!!!

Wow, after a somewhat extended and much needed rest, I'm getting ready to leap headlong back into writing and recording.  I've been taking guitar lessons which might just help me get some rock stuff out.  I'm pretty psyched about the whole thing actually.  I'd like to thank all of you for hanging around for my extended vacation (hey, after 5 years of writing and recording, running the board, etc. I needed a BREAK!  and boy did I get one.)

I'm going to start off by working on some lyrics and maybe recording a few ideas with others' lyrics, so post some stuff and let's get this baby rolling!

Back in the trenches....

Here we GO!

Subject: Re:JT, Old Dan, Dan, Mr. Fortunato et al - Join in!
Posted by: Jt
WooHoooo!!!

Dan, welcome back!!!!  You have been missed.

James, you've been the stalwart of the board thru the summer - I've lurked from work, but only participated in a minor way.  Thanks for your always good feedback (I learn from each of your critiques, so please keep 'em coming) and for the punch in the ribs.

Its been a busy but happy summer here.  Ok, I'll get busy.  Promise... but, we just got back from the pool, and I gotta get some kids in bed...

Let's get this board moving again.  Again, welcome back, Dan - you sound refreshed 

PS.
RobertK - you listening???

Subject: Re:JT, Old Dan, Dan, Mr. Fortunato et al - Join in!
Posted by: Hooper
Hey guys- Somebody please show Dan G the way over to the SubT Cafe! 

Seriously, I haven't spent much time over here on the songwriting page but it seems a natural that there should be a well-worn path between here and the Cafe.  Might be just the place to try out some of the stuff that gets written here.

See ya!
Hoop

P.S.  JT- Sorry I haven't gotten any comments up on the mp3 CD.  I'm getting pulled a lot of directions right now but will at least make a point to get back to you on that.

Subject: Re:JT, Old Dan, Dan, Mr. Fortunato et al - Join in!
Posted by: old_dan

Quote from: DanGray on July 19, 2002, 04:21 PM   

HAALLLOOOO!!!!

Wow, after a somewhat extended and much needed rest, I'm getting ready to leap headlong back into writing and recording.  I've been taking guitar lessons which might just help me get some rock stuff out.  I'm pretty psyched about the whole thing actually.  I'd like to thank all of you for hanging around for my extended vacation (hey, after 5 years of writing and recording, running the board, etc. I needed a BREAK!  and boy did I get one.)

I'm going to start off by working on some lyrics and maybe recording a few ideas with others' lyrics, so post some stuff and let's get this baby rolling!

Back in the trenches....

Here we GO!


Yaaaa! Glad to have you back Dan. Missed ya. Life is good


Subject: Re:JT, Old Dan, Dan, Mr. Fortunato et al - Join in!
Posted by: Steve_S.
Welcome back DanG!   
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